Hey… I have a critiquing service to recommend to y’all. Yes I know my business does that too but…this one is specialized.... and she’s a friend to boot. So hello I’m promoting a friend like I know she would my business.

Hi! My name is Camy Tang, and I have a critique service called The Story Sensei.

A novel's structure is like a button-down shirt. It can be mis-buttoned so that the story elements aren't quite in the right places or emphasized enough, making the manuscript disjointed.

I also know that writers are DIRT POOR (I'm one of them), and many can't afford to hire a freelance editor to go through their entire manuscript (which costs anywhere from $300 to $3000) and identify structural flaws.

I offer a cheaper, specialized alternative.

For only $40, I will do a high-level structural critique of your story using a 2-page single-spaced synopsis and a chapter-by-chapter synopsis. I'll look for things like:

• Good pacing, strong sense of movement
• Setting as a character
• Unique story premise
• Voice
• Clear story arc--beginning, middle, end
• Inciting Incident
• External goals
• Internal goals
• Obstacles/conflict
• Epiphany/sacrifice
• Black Moment
• Flaws
• Unique/original characters
• Secondary characters--goals, depth, contribute to the story

You can find more information on my website, including testimonies from writers who have benefited from my services: http://www.camytang.com/sensei.html

Thanks! If you have any questions, don't hesitate to email me.
Camy

Thanks to my wonderful friend Heather for being so nice and mentioning me even though I didn't even see this blog for days and she had to give my butt a swift kick to remind me.

I wuv you, hun!
camy

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